An important inventor that was discriminated

Written by Freddy Palma:

Marie Curie, that is a very important women in the history. She had a difficult life, with some problems of food and she left the house. Suffering by the cold. Marie Curie was a great woman with a great intelligence. Pitifully people didn´t notice it.

(Marie Curie in her laboratory)

A time when only few women were scientistic Marie Curie was there, with a high capacity of discovering and investigating things. And his discovering changed the world. Pitifully nobody notices. Not until people heard that she was an important discoverer that had won a Nobel prize. Before that she left her house to study math at a leading university. Like any woman. She followed her scientistic interests. But one day received a commission to study the proprieties of the magnetic steel.

 

She was the first woman in the history winning a Nobel prize twice, because she won it in two scientistic fields. One important event that she had was the discoverment of two fundamental materials that are the polonium and the radium. I was discovered when Marie was analyzing the contents of the uranium. Later of announcing this discoverment Marie was awarded with a doctorate in physics and later was awarded with the Nobel prize too.

Marie Curie was very recognized woman. She made a big shift in the understanding of the atoms in science. She was, is and will be remembered as an important woman in the history.

 

The importance of learning new paragraphs

What is the importance of learning types of paragraphs and how is this advantageous for our writing skills?

Have you ever think about the importance of writing paragraphs or learning new types of paragraphs, and what is the importance in my life? Today I will discuss about the importance of writing paragraphs that are narrative and argumentative; and how can it help us in life Let´s start now.   

To begin with the argumentative paragraph is a paragraph with the purpose of persuade the reader to be in the same position of an opinion as you, or to persuade somebody to get interested in a product, a cause or for other topics. To write an argumentative paragraph you must: have arguments, have knowledge of what are you going to talk about and evidence and always with a persuasive attitude. If you don’t, you cannot persuade people. Now let´s continue with the narrative paragraph. The narrative paragraph is usually used for tell and write a story about something that happened in the past that probably was very relevant or exciting and that is good, because you can talk better if it. This stories can be funny or sad. Now to write a narrative paragraph we have to: do a brain storm, set the scene and put a conclusion in the end.

To continue I´m going to give you some arguments of how writing can help us in life. 1. - The ability to express our ideas, writing is one of the most effective forms of expressing ideas, inform or teach. 2. – Serve as a recording in a future, if you are those people that always forget something in expositions writing is going to help you writing in a paper all the thing you probably don´t remember well. 3. - Improve communication skills, if you want to improve in debates or speeches, writing can help you canalize your brain. 4. - Improves focus and connects with yourself, when you write you must be focused, so write a lot and you will be very focused at times when you have to present a speech or a expo.  5. - Improves imagination and creativity, when you write your brain uses all of your neurons and cells so it´s great.

 

To finalize learning different types of paragraphs are very important in our growing process, because you can express your ideas much better at the moment of the writing and it help us for identification some types of paragraphs and how to write one correctly. 

Personal Narrative

 My painful story in the beach called shrimp in Esmeraldas

Have you ever been stung by a jellyfish?

To begin with it was a very stressful day, it was very cold and I was in my house very stressed and my family too, because the house was unclean and some things were slimy, and the floor smelled very stinky. Of course we fix all of that. After that we clean all I had an idea that was go to the beach, because we wanted to relax and lay aside the technology. But our travel to the beach wasn´t very relax, at least for me.

Then we went to an hotel very dark, but it hasn´t any type of technology so it was perfect. And we had a surprise, the boss of the hotel was a cousin of my father. So the attention was very good. After that we tried the food and it was very tasty with a little bit spicy and slimy flavor, but it was ok nothing and nobody is perfect.

The juice was very sugared, it was an orange juice. Now cames the painful part for me. When we went to the beach in the water and sand I was swimming very happy, always choking with the salty water, but who doesn´t chock with the salty water in the beach. After 3 or 2 hours of funny we went back to the hotel. But I had a strange pain in my left side of my face. I feel the pain after I take a shower, my mom said that it could be the sun or that I felt in the sun. The days passed and my pain was increasing.

So I was very sad, because I couldn´t go to the beach anymore until my injury heal completely. Then we went to our house and my injury was very painful and horrible, because it looks that Wolverine hurts me in my face. After that my mom took a date for me to go to a doctor and check my injury. I was very fortunate, because if the jellyfish touched my eye it was a very serious problem. Until now I have the cicatrix of my incident. Finally I will never forget the beautiful sound of the beach, and the sunset.

Why did I choose my speech?

To begin with my speech was created by Abraham Lincoln in Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, November 19, 1863 and the meaning of it is that it was a turning point in the war. The stated purpose of Lincoln's speech was to dedicate a plot of land that would become Soldier's National Cemetery. 

 

Then some reasons that I choose this speech is, because in his speech, he invoked the principles of human equality said in the Declaration of Independence and connected the sacrifices of the Civil War with the desire for (a new birth of freedom) as well as the all important preservation of the Union created in 1776 and it's ideal of government. Abraham Lincoln change the world in two minutes.

After that another reason is that he also had to inspire the people to continue the fight. Another reason is that it is considered one of the greatest political speeches of all time, explaining America critical challenges in their historical context succinctly while paying tribute to the men who had died in the face of those challenges. All men are created equal' refers to slavery a key cause of the American Civil War. In this war more than 3,100 American troops were killed and 3,900 Confederates died. 

Finally he was in Gettysburg to dedicate a national military cemetery to the Union soldiers who fell at the Battle of Gettysburg four months earlier. It is good to motivate soldiers to fight for their nations.

Why you should do exercise?

Exercise is important in our lives, because doing exercise help us in our muscles. For example it will help us in our heart. How? evitationg heart attacks. This help us becoming our muscles stronger. 

Can be the legs muscles for kicking something very far away, or in arms for lift heavy things.

Let me tell you the reason why people should exercise. Number, because it will help you to keep fit and healthy as I mentioned before. Look an example with famous strong people.

The rock or Dyawne Johnsonhe coud be in his past a fat person (it´s only an example) and he became a very strong person.

Doing excersise is good and healthy so you must aplicate it in your body and in your life!

Freddy Palma

Why you should have internet?

 Why you should have internet?

The internet is one of the biggest creations in the human history, we use it in all moment. For example: when we play videogames, when we do a online homework, when You chat, etc. Castells(2007)"Internet is more than a techologic, is a tool for comunication and social organization"(p.60). The internet is a good and a bad thing. Internet helps us to do and investigate things, but it's bad too, because some people use it to do bad things, like hacking, cheating, copy, etc.

  Persuasive paragraphs

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Smoking

A point I would like to argue is about how bad smoking is for your health. Cigarettes contain three harmful substances, nicotine, tar and monoxide of carbon. The Nicotine is a nasty and highly addictive drug, that´s why if you smoke you will not stop. Nicotine also causes blood pressure to rise and also cause heart attacks. Cigarettes also contain tar. The Tar is a disgusting brown sticky substance that blocks your lungs and cuts down the amount of oxygen getting into your blood stream and therefore the rest of the body. Tar can also cause lung cancer which is life threatning. carbon monoxide is also present in cigarettes. Carbon monoxide is a poisoness gas, which like tar, also prevents oxygen from getting around the body.

So all in all i think we can agree that smoking is in no way shape or form a good thing and is a great danger to smokers and those around them. i hope these facts have convinced you that smoking is nothing but bad for you.

2.-

Recycling

Recycling is a crucial part of caring for the environment because it reduces pollution, saves renewable and non-renewable materials, and saves energy. 
To mention a few resources toward this innovative process: first, we will reduce the amount of waste sent to landfills. Second, we will conserve natural resources for a long time like water and minerals. Third, we will save energy, and finally we will prevent some diseases caused by garbage. On the other hand, if we don't recycle and we don't make it part of our daily lives, we will continue to watch consequences, such as: increase pollution, garbage would accumulate, greenhouse gases would increase, fossil fuels would be reduced, natural habitats would be destroyed, and there could be total deforestation.

Thus, recycling is the best way we can save the Earth, have a clean atmosphere and keep all the natural sources, and it is very important because it has a lot of benefits, so everyone must recycle.