An important invenotr that was discriminated

jueves, 6 de mayo de 2021

Personal Narrative

 My painful story in the beach called shrimp in Esmeraldas

Have you ever been stung by a jellyfish?

To begin with it was a very stressful day, it was very cold and I was in my house very stressed and my family too, because the house was unclean and some things were slimy, and the floor smelled very stinky. Of course we fix all of that. After that we clean all I had an idea that was go to the beach, because we wanted to relax and lay aside the technology. But our travel to the beach wasn´t very relax, at least for me.

Then we went to an hotel very dark, but it hasn´t any type of technology so it was perfect. And we had a surprise, the boss of the hotel was a cousin of my father. So the attention was very good. After that we tried the food and it was very tasty with a little bit spicy and slimy flavor, but it was ok nothing and nobody is perfect.

The juice was very sugared, it was an orange juice. Now cames the painful part for me. When we went to the beach in the water and sand I was swimming very happy, always choking with the salty water, but who doesn´t chock with the salty water in the beach. After 3 or 2 hours of funny we went back to the hotel. But I had a strange pain in my left side of my face. I feel the pain after I take a shower, my mom said that it could be the sun or that I felt in the sun. The days passed and my pain was increasing.

So I was very sad, because I couldn´t go to the beach anymore until my injury heal completely. Then we went to our house and my injury was very painful and horrible, because it looks that Wolverine hurts me in my face. After that my mom took a date for me to go to a doctor and check my injury. I was very fortunate, because if the jellyfish touched my eye it was a very serious problem. Until now I have the cicatrix of my incident. Finally I will never forget the beautiful sound of the beach, and the sunset.



2 comentarios:

  1. Very good job and unfortunatelly history !

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  2. Hi freddy I really liked your story and at the same time a little sad because you couldn't have a good time on the beach with your family, I liked this blog very good job. Juan Bravo

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